The line graph shows the past and projected finances for a local authority in New Zealand. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The given graph chart displays the past and projected finances for a local authority in New Zealand.
Overall
, Rates revenue and User charges are increasing equally and gradually for around 2,0-2,5 million
dollars
. Whereas
, Borrowings was maintaining mostly between 800-900 million
dollars
from 2012 to 2022 on average. But Borrowings were bumpy from 800 to nearly 1,500 million
dollars
between 2019 and 2020 and decreased less than by 1,000 million
dollars
. And
Grants and subsidies increased gradually from below 400 to nearly 500 Correct word choice
apply
million
dollars
between 2012 and 2022, but it was bumpy nearly 800 million
dollars
in 2016 and was falling again below 600 million
dollars
and it decreased gradually from 800 to 500 million
dollars
between 2016 and 2022.
In conclusion, Rates revenue and User charges were increasing gradually year after year without being bumpy, by contrast
, Borrowings, Grants and subsidies were bumpy and going to be steady.Submitted by ryujaekwang0928 on
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