In their advertising, businesses nowadays usually emphasise that their products are the new in some way. Why is this ? Do you think it is a positive or negative development?

Nowadays advertisement plays a major role in selling a product.By the
way
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companies and
start up
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business need
a
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unique
adds
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ads
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which attracts
the
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people
.In my point of
view
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there
is
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a both positive and negative
side
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by
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advertising in a new
way
.
Basically
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businesses like
textlies
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textiles
and automotive sectors need
a
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special notice to increase their popularity and selling rate.There is
also
a necessary need to promote
adds
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in a new
way
to
competite
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compete
competitive
with the other companies.Dress
advertisemnet
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advertisement
advertisements
in
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the
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TV channels are a usual thing.By the new
way
of promotion in the TV
adds
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ads
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,
people
listen and notice.
For example
,
company
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a company
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promoting the truck claims that it can withstand 10
ton
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of
weights
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.Advertising
this
with the photo of
truck
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a truck
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carring
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carrying
the elephant attracts the
people
and they
beleive
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believe
it is a good truck manufacturing company.It is a positive sign of companies who
promotes
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in a new
way
. The negative side of
new
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the new
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way
adds
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results in
lot
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of
scam
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.The businesses which down in production and selling
worst
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products,
they
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also
do a unique kind of promotion.They promote their products with
a
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unbeleivable
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unbelievable
adds
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ads
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and get
a
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trust
from
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the
people
.
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, giving
lot
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of offers in the dress shops, the quality of the product is worst but the
way
they
promoting
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their shops in the
adds
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ads
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are
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good and unique. In conclusion, the new
way
and special type of
adds
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ads
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or notice are mostly helpful for the development of the company but
also
leads
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lead
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in
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a negative side because of unreal
adds
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ads
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.
People
should research the business
adds
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ads
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before trusting them.The new businesses need a special promotion to reach the
people
and it is
also
a necessary thing.
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  • emphasise
  • advertising
  • products
  • innovation
  • competitive strategy
  • consumer dissatisfaction
  • value
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