The line graph below represents the percentage of tourists to Engalnd who visited four different

The line graph below represents the percentage of tourists to

Engalnd

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England

who visited four different Brighton attractions between 1980 and 2010. As we see, in 1980 and 2010 the most popular leisure

activites

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activities

were the Pavilion and the Festival. In 1980 the least popular

attraction

was the Pier,

however

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in 2010

this

had changed and the Art gallery became the least popular one. During the 1980s and

1985s

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there was a huge amount of

visitors

who wanted to visit the Art gallery. The percentage of

visitors

had changed from 22% to 38%.

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happened to the Pavilion, but in another time period. In

1980s

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it was a pretty popular

attraction

, but in 1985 and 1995

visitors

suddenly increased from 26% to almost 50%.

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the Pier

also

fluctuated

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1980 and 2005,

then

it had

rised

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risen

raised

and significantly made the Art gallery the worst

between

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all Brighton attractions. On the whole, all Brighton

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had a lot of changes. For the whole period Festival

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experienced a bit of fluctuations, and it was the most peaceful one.It ended the year up as the

second best

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attraction

in England.