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The line graph below represents the percentage of tourists to Engalnd who visited four different

The line graph below represents the percentage of tourists to Engalnd who visited four different
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The line graph below represents the percentage of tourists to
Engalnd
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England
 who visited four different Brighton attractions between 1980 and 2010. As we see, in 1980 and 2010 the most popular leisure
activites
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activities
 were the Pavilion and the Festival. In 1980 the least popular
attraction
 was the Pier,
however
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 in 2010
this
 had changed and the Art gallery became the least popular one. During the 1980s and
1985s
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 there was a huge amount of
visitors
 who wanted to visit the Art gallery. The percentage of
visitors
 had changed from 22% to 38%.
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 happened to the Pavilion, but in another time period. In
1980s
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 it was a pretty popular
attraction
, but in 1985 and 1995
visitors
 suddenly increased from 26% to almost 50%.
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of
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 the Pier
also
 fluctuated
from
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 1980 and 2005,
then
 it had
rised
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risen
raised
 and significantly made the Art gallery the worst
between
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 all Brighton attractions. On the whole, all Brighton
attraction
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attractions
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 had a lot of changes. For the whole period Festival
had
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experienced a bit of fluctuations, and it was the most peaceful one.It ended the year up as the
second best
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second-best
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attraction
 in England.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words attraction, visitors with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "represents" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "changed" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "fluctuated" was used 2 times.
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