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The table below gives information about the underground railway Systems in six cities.

The table below gives information about the underground railway Systems in six cities.
#information #railway #systems #six #cities
This
 table
illustrate
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 information about
subway
 ways in different towns.
It is clear that
 the
most
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older
subway
 system in
a
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London
what
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which
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 was
lunched
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launched
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 in 1868
year
 it is the
most longger
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longer
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route
of
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in
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the
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total (394 kilometres). In one
year
this
subway
 in London
ussing
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using
 775
milions
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million
millions
 people. By applying the contrast,
railway
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the railway
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 in Tokyo which was opened in 1927
year
have
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had
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 considerably more
client
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clients
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 in one
year
 there
are
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were
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 1 927
millions
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million
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 passengers.
Although
railway
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the railway
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 in Tokyo
have
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third
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a third
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 of the total
route
 there are 155
kilometers
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kilometres
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way
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away
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.
Whereas
railway
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the railway
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 in Kyoto it
have
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 just 11 kilometres.
Subway
 in Kyoto was
lunched
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launched
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 in 1981
year
 and it
dillevered
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delivered
 45
millions
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million
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pessengers
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passengers
 in one
year
.  In
conclution
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conclusion
,
table
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the table
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compare
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shows
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 that most older
railway
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railways
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 have
most
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bigger
route
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routes
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,
while
subway
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the subway
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 in Tokyo most popular
from
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in
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 the nation.
Smallest
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 minority of the totals in
case
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the case
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route
it
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is in Kyoto.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words subway, year, route, railway with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "table" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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