The charts below show the changes in ownership of electrical appliances and amount of time spent doing housework in households in one country between 1920 and 2019. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The charts below show the changes in ownership of electrical appliances and amount of time spent doing housework in households in one country between 1920 and 2019.

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The line graph displays some information about the variations in owning electrical utilities and how much time is spent fulfilling house chores in a country from 1920 to 2019.
Overall
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,
it is clear that
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buying
refrigerators
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for homes accounted for the most increase, compared with other appliances.
On the other hand
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, the number of hours of working in houses per week has declined over the time in question. In 1920, almost no refrigerator was owned in households,
while
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washing machines and
vacuum
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cleaners were in use, at 40 per cent and 30% respectively.
Then
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, in 1940, the percentage of ownership of all three devices grew, and it was quite similar, the proportion of purchasing
refrigerators
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was at roughly 55%, the
vacuum
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cleaner at 50%, and the washing machine at 60%. In 1960,
while
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the percentages of ownership of washing machines and
vacuum
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cleaners were the same, at 70 per cent, the proportion of household
refrigerators
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escalated to 90%.
Finally
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,
at the end
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of the period, the percentages of
refrigerators
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and
vacuum
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cleaners were both 100%.
However
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, washing machines were used less, at approximately 75%. Concerning the time spent on housework, it decreased dramatically from 50%, in 1920, to only 10%, in 2019.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Vocabulary: Replace the words refrigerators, vacuum with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • ownership of electrical appliances
  • steadily increased
  • dramatically decreased
  • correlating the rise
  • became common
  • households
  • prevalence
  • technological advancements
  • increased affordability
  • household chores
  • labor-saving devices
  • allocated for housework
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