In some countries young people choosing to enrol in work based training instead of university education

In today's society, Education is an aspect of life that has been given the utmost importance.

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in many countries young people choose to enrol in vocational training

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of pursuing a university education.

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practice brings about a mix beg of both and bane. I believe that work-based training surely

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positive benefits

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students.

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, the advantages clearly outshine the disadvantages. On the constructive part, younglings

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blessed with numerous merits because of apprenticeship at an early age.

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with, being employed just after finishing school can bring a sense of responsibility.

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a recent article published by

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magazine reported that approximately 80% of American youth started their own career at eighteen and

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in it.

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, vocational training can enhance abilities to try newer things. To illustrate, many students have found their desired career during their on-the-job training period. The famous founder of

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big textile brand in India got inspiration from his first part-time job in a cloth factory.

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, eating in their initial stage of age has benefited them in other aspects of life.they become independent and learn to deal with real-life challenges. It can make them wise and mature. In

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they are on their own they are more likely to avoid silly mistakes. On the destructive part, there appears to be

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in

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trend. Chiefly, tertiary education is essential for the growth and development of a person. University can sharpen the knowledge and skills of individuals at the next level.

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worth mentioning that higher qualifications provide

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life and bigger salaries.

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, it is often observed that youngsters are stuck in their basic jobs forever.and

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develop laziness to switch careers. I believe that there is no significant drawback that can outweigh the advantages.

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trying every kind of work can open a wide range of opportunities for students.