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You are applying for a Job and need a reference. Write a letter to the boss in your former Job. In your letter: •Give details of the job •Explain why it is important to you •Suggest what information your ex-boss could put in the reference.

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Dear Mr. John, I am writing
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 letter to ask you for a
reference
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 for a new job.As
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 am one of your employees who worked as a software engineer in your firm.Earlier I did a job for 6 hours per day in your office.
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 to
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, I am moving to an urban area to fulfil my dream of doing a full-time job. The new workplace where I was supposed to do work asked for a
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 from a previous company.
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 I require your
reference
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.
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,the new one sends an email in which they ask to fill out the form from the former boss.In
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way
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 it is pivotal to give all the information by you. In the
reference
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 box, the boss can enter entire information
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 as the starting and ending date of my work.
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, I helped your company in order to accomplish its goals.Could you please refer me to another well-established company? I look forward to hearing from you! Yours sincerely, Navdeep Kaur

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task response
Ensure to clearly request for a letter of reference, and outline the relevant details of the job position and why a reference is needed.
coherence and cohesion
The greeting and closing need to be more formal and professional for a letter requesting a reference. Maintain a consistent tone throughout the letter.
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