The chart shows the percentage of households in owned and rented accommodation in England and Wales between 1918 and 2011

The chart shows the percentage of households in owned and rented accommodation in England and Wales between 1918 and 2011
The given bar graph illustrates
the households proportion
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the proportion of the household
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in various homes located in England and Wales from
year
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1918 till 2011.
Overall
, we observe from 1918 till 2001 the ratio of people living on rent is decreasing.
Whereas
individuals purchasing their own residence is increasing.
Initially
, in 1918 almost 80% of citizens preferred to live in
rent
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houses.
However
, between 1939 and 1953
this
dropped
down
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to 69%.
Furthermore
, in 1971 it decreased to 50%. With the passage of time, households opting for rented places from 1981 till 2001, the trend went
on
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downwards (average 35%). In comparison, if we look at the percentage of owned
residentials
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residents
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. From 1918
till
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1953 it was between 20% – 30%. In later years,
this
was increasing
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with
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40 % in 1961, 60% in 1981 and nearly 70% in 1991 and 2001.
While
, in 2011,
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%
decreased
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witnessed.
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Basic structure: Change the fifth paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words ass with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "decreased" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fifth paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • ownership
  • tenancy
  • trend
  • fluctuation
  • proportion
  • residence
  • dwelling
  • shift
  • transition
  • migration
  • fluctuate
  • stabilize
  • rise
  • fall
  • increase
  • decrease
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