The chart shows the percentage of households in owned and rented accommodation in England and Wales between 1918 and 2011
The given bar graph illustrates
the households proportion
in various homes located in England and Wales from Change to a genitive case
the proportion of the household
the proportion of the households
year
1918 till 2011.
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the year
Overall
, we observe from 1918 till 2001 the ratio of people living on rent is decreasing. Whereas
individuals purchasing their own residence is increasing.
Initially
, in 1918 almost 80% of citizens preferred to live in rent
houses. Replace the word
rented
However
, between 1939 and 1953 this
dropped down
to 69%. Change preposition
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Furthermore
, in 1971 it decreased to 50%. With the passage of time, households opting for rented places from 1981 till 2001, the trend went on
downwards (average 35%).
In comparison, if we look at the percentage of owned Change preposition
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residentials
. From 1918 Correct your spelling
residents
till
1953 it was between 20% – 30%. In later years, Change preposition
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increased
with
40 % in 1961, 60% in 1981 and nearly 70% in 1991 and 2001. Change preposition
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While
, in 2011, 5
% Correct article usage
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decreased
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decrease
is
witnessed.
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