The chart shows the percentage of households in owned and rented accommodation in England and Wales between 1918 and 2011

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The given bar graph illustrates

the households proportion

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the proportion of the household

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in various homes located in England and Wales from

year

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1918 till 2011.

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, we observe from 1918 till 2001 the ratio of people living on rent is decreasing.

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individuals purchasing their own residence is increasing.

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, in 1918 almost 80% of citizens preferred to live in

rent

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houses.

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, between 1939 and 1953

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dropped

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to 69%.

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, in 1971 it decreased to 50%. With the passage of time, households opting for rented places from 1981 till 2001, the trend went

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downwards (average 35%). In comparison, if we look at the percentage of owned

residentials

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residents

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. From 1918

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1953 it was between 20% – 30%. In later years,

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was increasing

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40 % in 1961, 60% in 1981 and nearly 70% in 1991 and 2001.

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, in 2011,

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decreased

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witnessed.

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Vocabulary: The word "decreased" was used 2 times.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

5 paragraphs

155 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

ownership
tenancy
trend
fluctuation
proportion
residence
dwelling
shift
transition
migration
fluctuate
stabilize
rise
fall
increase
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The chart shows the percentage of households in owned and rented accommodation in England and Wales between 1918 and 2011

some places old age is valued, while in other cultures youth is considered more important. Disscuss both views and give your opinion

The media pay too much attention to the lives and relationships of celebrities such as actors, singers or footballers. They should spend more time reporting the lives of ordinary people instead. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Students should be taught academic knowledge so that they can pass exams, and skills such as cooking or dressing should not be taught. To what extent do you agree or disagree