Some countries achieve international sports by building specialized facilities to train top athlets, insteadproviding sports facilities that everyone can use. Do you think this is positive or negative development.

Some governments provide modernized equipment and infrastructure

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that are only available for top

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to achieve international

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competitions.

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, every sportsperson can access these

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is a positive development for the

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and sportspersons. First of all, Constructing

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institutes in a specific place for well-trained

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is more beneficial than building all over the places in

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, because the government should spend higher expenditure on every institute maintenance

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as light and water, and international trainers. If training is provided all the places consume more and more money. So , training only top

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is positive,

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illustrate, many developing countries establish sporting centres in the capital city for trained international

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, Olympic

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, and cricket contestants,

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to, every player being carefully watched and

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by individual trainers so

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become top

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.

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, many authorities provide

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facilities

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in every school and university, that everyone can use. A number of schools and universities appoint at least one

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trainer, who trains the students and can select the best

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for

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competitions

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as the district, provincial and national levels. So that, no need construct

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all over the area. ,

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if top

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achieve in international competition, the

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becomes more popular and gets rewarded

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training only the best

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is positive for nations.

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, in India Prakjanantha became famous in chess competitions at in age of 20

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India

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became popular in chess.

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, establishing specialized equipment and

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for only international

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is beneficial for the

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because reduces the expenditure and the nation becomes popular.