The table below shows the preferred TV programs by the different age groups in a european country in 2012.

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The data provided in the form of a table compares the popularity of six different types of TV programs among three age groups in a European nation in 2012.

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, children who are aged between 11 to 15 years were less absorbed by news and TV dramas.

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, TV dramas are less liked by the 15- 20 age group.

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, the popularity of cartons among the population of 21- 25 years was the lowest compared with other channels.

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The table below shows the preferred TV programs by the different age groups in a european country in 2012.

This is a part of a letter your receive from an English pen friend. Don't forget to tell me about the area you live in and what you and your friends do in your free time. Write a letter to your pen friend. Write your letter in about 100 words.

Big salary is much more important than job satisfaction. Do you agree or disagree? Provide relevant examples if necessary.

A lot of people believe that the amount of violence shown on TV and in the cinema affects the actions of our young people and therefore increases the amount of violence in our society today. Do you agree or disagree with this statement?

You arranged to visit a friend in Canada but an important event at home, now means that you must change the date of the visit -explain the important event -apologise for the sitution -suggest a new arragment.

In recent years, the family structure has changed, as well as family roles. Do you think these changes are positive or negative?