The chart below gives information about how families in one country spent their weekly income in 1968 and in 2018. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
The chart illustrates how society spent their weekly salary at the time of 1968
compare
to 2018.
It is noticed that in 1968 Wrong verb form
compared
population
spent the majority of their salary Correct article usage
the population
in
food by 35 %. Followed by housing, clothing and Change preposition
on
footware
by 10 %. The other items, Correct your spelling
footwear
such
as household goods, personal goods, and transport, are spent by
5% of their income weekly. Change preposition
apply
Additional
, leisure is in around 9 % of their bills. The Change the word
Additionally
last
thing that they spent money in
was Change preposition
on
in
fuel and power.
Change preposition
apply
On the other hand
, 2018 shows a drastically
decrease in Change the word
drastic
percentage
of money spent weekly Add an article
the percentage
in
important items. Change preposition
on
For example
, food was reduced by almost 15% of their spendings
. But, leisure was increased by 12 %, and housing by 9 %. The other topics Fix the agreement mistake
spending
kept
almost the same.
Verb problem
were
To conclude
, seems like nowadays families are wasting more money in
leisure and housing than Change preposition
on
in
food which it's very importantChange preposition
on
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Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
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Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
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