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the football
world
cup
cricket
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and other international Correct your spelling
cup match
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international
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international
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and nationalistic feelings way. I completely agree with topic
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this
topic.
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with, most people
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games. It depence
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depends
country
wise. But many Correct article usage
the country
people
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World
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matches Cricket
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matches and the Olympics for Capitalize word
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Cricket
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a number
the number
people
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is
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rating
cricket
matches, All people
are topotion
their problems. Correct your spelling
option
to potion
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team There are lot
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a lot
cricket
fans in our country
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a good
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, Olympic
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the Olympic
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are that
that
most international Correct determiner usage
the
game
in the Fix the agreement mistake
games
world
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of countries and Change the article
a lot
number
of Change the article
a number
the number
playe's
are Correct your spelling
players
player's
paticipating
to Correct your spelling
participating
this
event. Then
player's
try to win the games Change noun form
players
as well as
they are represting
their Correct your spelling
representing
repressing
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. That players
always try to up their Correct determiner usage
Players
contry
I think Correct your spelling
country
football
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the football
world
& Patriotic
emotions. Another thing Correct your spelling
and patriotic
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famous
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has
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World Cup
cup
all the
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Brazil
win
the Correct subject-verb agreement
wins
world
cup
, they donate money for Change noun form
brazil's
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poor Capitalize word
Brazil
people
.
In Conclusion, I will have disassed
. first and second paragraph. Internatio Correct your spelling
discussed
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sports
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are
reallsing
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realising
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mentioned
tensions
and loyalty feeling. I believe that It is best
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and patriotic
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patriotism
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