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opinions Some Countries Organize popular
sports
events.
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as
football
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the football
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world
cup
cricket
world
cupmatch
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cup match
and other international
sports
, which
internatio
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international
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intrnational
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international
tensions
and nationalistic feelings way. I completely agree with
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. I will discuss why agree with
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To begin
with, most
people
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games. It
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depends
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wise. But many
people
like to watch football
world
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Cup
matches
Cricket
world
cup
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matches and the Olympics for
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, India is
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farmers for
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Cricket
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of
cricket
fans lives in India. So we know about Ipakh
people
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& Caution. Try
as well as
number
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of post
people
ling in
this
country
. But grey
are
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ratebing
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rating
cricket
matches, All
people
are
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option
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these days
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country
Sri Lanka
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Co many problems.
such
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fuel and jobless. But
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all
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can solve our
cricket
team There are
lot
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of
cricket
fans in our
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.
Then
some international
cricket
matches in Our
country
. Most
people
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tensions
. So I think it is
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advantage for our
country
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,
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games
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that
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most international
game
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games
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in the
world
. Because
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of countries and
number
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the number
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of
playe's
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players
player's
are
paticipating
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participating
to
this
event.
Then
player's
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players
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try to win the games
as well as
they are
represting
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representing
repressing
their
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.
That players
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always try to up their
contry
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country
I think
football
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world
& Patriotic
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and patriotic
emotions. Another thing
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game. Brazil
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the
world
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cup
all
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year.
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example, brazil
people
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Brazil
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the
world
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, they donate money for
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poor
people
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discussed
dismissed
. first and second paragraph. Internatio
sports
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reallsing
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realising
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mentioned
tensions
and loyalty feeling. I believe that It is
best
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and
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