The charts below show the changes in ownership of electrical appliances and amount of time spent doing housework in households in one country between 1920 and 2019. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words
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is an answer written by a candidate who achieved a Band 5.0 score. This
charts
shows about Change the determiner
chart
percentage
of households
with electrical appliances and Number
of Correct article usage
the Number
hour
Change to a plural noun
hours
at
housework per Change preposition
of
week
, per household between 1920 and 2019.
In the first chart washing machine. Refrigerator
. Vacuum
cleaner
all rise from 1920 to 2019. Fix the agreement mistake
cleaners
Refrigerator
and Fix the agreement mistake
Refrigerators
Vacuum
cleaner
Fix the agreement mistake
cleaners
increase
faster than washing machine
. In 1920, Fix the agreement mistake
machines
Refrigerator
Correct article usage
the Refrigerator
just
zero Add a missing verb
had just
percentage
of households
and Refrigerator
Correct article usage
the Refrigerator
is
30 Wrong verb form
was
percentage
of households
, but in 2019 they all increase
Wrong verb form
increased
100
Change preposition
by 100
percentage
of household
. Washing machine is to Fix the agreement mistake
households
percantage
of Correct your spelling
percentage
households
in 1920, however
in 2019 is just increase
about
15 Change preposition
by about
percantage
Correct your spelling
percentage
at
Change preposition
in
households
, and washing mashine
Correct your spelling
machine
is
Wrong verb form
were
overed
by Correct your spelling
covered
Pefrigerator
and Correct your spelling
Refrigerator
Vacuum
cleaner
in 1940 and 1960. Fix the agreement mistake
cleaners
Vacuum
cleaner Add an article
The vacuum
A vacuum
is
Wrong verb form
was
overed
by Pefrigerator in 1942.
In the second chart Houses per Correct your spelling
covered
week
is 50 Number
of hours per week
, but it decline to 10 Number
of hours per week
in 2019.
Over than
, Replace the word
then
Correct article usage
the percentang
percentang
of Correct your spelling
percentage
households
with electical
Correct your spelling
electrical
appliance
Fix the agreement mistake
appliances
increase
Wrong verb form
increased
however
Number
of
per Change preposition
apply
week
decline
from 1920 to 2019.Wrong verb form
declined
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "decline" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
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