The charts below show the changes in ownership of electrical appliances and amount of time spent doing housework in households in one country between 1920 and 2019. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words

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charts

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shows about

percentage

of

households

with electrical appliances and

Number

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the Number

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of

hour

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hours

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at

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of

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housework per

week

, per household between 1920 and 2019. In the first chart washing machine.

Refrigerator

.

Vacuum

cleaner

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cleaners

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all rise from 1920 to 2019.

Refrigerator

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Refrigerators

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and

Vacuum

cleaner

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cleaners

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increase

faster than washing

machine

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machines

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. In 1920,

Refrigerator

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the Refrigerator

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just

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had just

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zero

percentage

of

households

and

Refrigerator

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the Refrigerator

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is

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was

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30

percentage

of

households

, but in 2019 they all

increase

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increased

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100

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by 100

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percentage

of

household

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households

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. Washing machine is to

percantage

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percentage

of

households

in 1920,

however

in 2019 is just

increase

about

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by about

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15

percantage

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percentage

at

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in

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households

, and washing

mashine

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machine

is

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were

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overed

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covered

by

Pefrigerator

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Refrigerator

and

Vacuum

cleaner

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cleaners

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in 1940 and 1960.

Vacuum

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The vacuum

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cleaner

is

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was

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overed

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covered

by Pefrigerator in 1942. In the second chart Houses per

week

is 50

Number

of hours per

week

, but it decline to 10

Number

of hours per

week

in 2019. Over

than

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then

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,

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the percentang

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percentang

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percentage

of

households

with

electical

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electrical

appliance

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appliances

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increase

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increased

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however

Number

of

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apply

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per

week

decline

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declined

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from 1920 to 2019.