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The top priority of businesses is making money, and they do not need to have social resbonsibilities. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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The higher precedence of businesses is earning money, and they shouldn't take care of public liabilities. I definitely disagree with
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 statement as I think that making money should always be combined with social responsibility, and I will try to discover my point of view in
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 essay. First of all, I am convinced that social responsibility can help businesses to develop more quickly and intensively.
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, if your business is the construction of buildings, and you do it taking under your consideration the safety and affordability of the building,
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 your reputation will enlarge
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 and
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, and,
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, you will have more consumers and
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 you will be able to make more capital.
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, sometimes managers in pursuit of income lose the quality of their production. I am sure that it is
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 the result of irresponsibility. Needless to say, in
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 ,case your business won't live long. As another argument, I would like to point out the well-known fact that big property can spoil people, and they start thinking that they can use all the tools to earn as much money as they can. So, social responsibilities put some moral restrictions on businesses and their owners,
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 they will never break the law.
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, you will never cut down forests to build private cottages if you feel the liability of preserving the ecosystem. In conclusion, I am highly sure that social consciousness and responsibility should be combined
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 running a business, and only in
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 case it will be effective.
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