The chart shows the number of shops that closed and the number of new shops opening in a country from 2011 to 2018.

The chart shows the number of shops that closed and the number of new shops opening in a country from 2011 to 2018.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The chart shows the number of shops that closed and the number of new shops opening in a country from 2011 to 2018.
The chart gives information about the
number
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of closed
shops
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and new openings in the
year
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2011-2018 in a country. If we look at the graph, there is some fluctuation in the
number
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of closing
shops
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between 2011-2014,
then
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reached to peak of about 7000 in the
year
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2013. Interestingly,
this
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number
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decreased incredibly to 500 in the
year
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2015. Later, it went up and reached nearly 5,000
shops
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in the
year
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2016, and it reached to steady state in the final couple of years (2017 and 2018).
On the other hand
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, the
number
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of opening
shops
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was recorded highest (8500) in the
year
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2011. Ultimately, one
year
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later, it decreased by half in 2012.
However
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,
this
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number
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increased to 6000 opening
shops
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in the
year
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2014.
Additionally
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, it reduced to 4000 in the
year
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2015. Until 20117, it decreased again to 3000
shops
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.
Overall
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,
it is clear that
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the
number
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of closer
shops
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decreased especially in one of the years reached a lower rate.
Additionally
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, the
number
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of new opening
shops
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reduced too.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "additionally".
Vocabulary: Replace the words number, shops, year with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 5 times.
Vocabulary: The word "decreased" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "reached" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "reduced" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • trend
  • fluctuation
  • peak
  • decline
  • surge
  • stabilize
  • correlation
  • economic conditions
  • consumer behavior
  • technological advancements
  • urban development
  • employment
  • retail sector
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