The chart shows the number of shops that closed and the number of new shops opening in a country from 2011 to 2018.

The chart shows the number of shops that closed and the number of new shops opening in a country from 2011 to 2018.
The chart gives information about the
number
of closed
shops
and new openings in the
year
2011-2018 in a country. If we look at the graph, there is some fluctuation in the
number
of closing
shops
between 2011-2014,
then
reached to peak of about 7000 in the
year
2013. Interestingly,
this
number
decreased incredibly to 500 in the
year
2015. Later, it went up and reached nearly 5,000
shops
in the
year
2016, and it reached to steady state in the final couple of years (2017 and 2018).
On the other hand
, the
number
of opening
shops
was recorded highest (8500) in the
year
2011. Ultimately, one
year
later, it decreased by half in 2012.
However
,
this
number
increased to 6000 opening
shops
in the
year
2014.
Additionally
, it reduced to 4000 in the
year
2015. Until 20117, it decreased again to 3000
shops
.
Overall
,
it is clear that
the
number
of closer
shops
decreased especially in one of the years reached a lower rate.
Additionally
, the
number
of new opening
shops
reduced too.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words number, shops, year with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "reduced" was used 2 times.
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