The chart below show the changes that took place in three different areas of crime in New Port City Center from 2003 to 2012. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisions where relevant

The chart below show the changes that took place in three different areas of crime in New Port City Center from 2003 to 2012.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisions where relevant
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The Graph illustrates the changes that took place
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Port City Center Crime in three different places from 2003 to 2012.
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, The crime rate was reduced
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throughout
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year
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though one is more significant and
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others
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two are almost steady state.
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, The Burglary Offence
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reduceing
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reducing
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significantly from 2003 to 2012. From the very
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the
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cases are almost 3500 and increasing the next
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. From
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2004 to following subsequent
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the
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of incidents dipped and reached
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the lowest
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number
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2008 in
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more than 1000
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occurrences
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next four years the
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not much
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. Apart
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,
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two illegal
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are not much more visually changed. Car
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percentage greater than 2500 in 2003 and ended
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less than 2500 in 2012. Throughout the whole time
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period
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lowest
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almost 2000 in the
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of
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2006. Robbery Cases are the steady
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state
conditions in the full period of time from 2003 to 2012. In
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declined
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time pwriod though one is noticeable and
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others
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two are not
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significant
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 73%.
Vocabulary: Replace the words year, number with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "changes" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "significant" was used 2 times.
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