The current topic of discussion is the fact that people are sleeping less than they used to. What do you think is the reason for this?

What are the implications for individuals and those around them? It's undeniable that we all don't look at
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at night and stay up late at night. Phones and other technological gadgets have become an essential part of our lives. The purpose of
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essay is to examine the factors that cause individuals to stay up late and get little sleep. One of the main reasons is the love we have for our
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gadgets,
such
as phones, TVs, and computers. Many
people
have a habit of looking at their phones or working at the computer at night. Watch your
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TV shows and programs. The reason for
this
is
people
's lack of sleep
due to
the need to get up early,
due to
which they sleep for about 4-6 hours.
This
is not enough to maintain good health, but enough to sustain life. In my opinion, the second reason is that individuals fail to complete their tasks and postpone them until later. The accumulation of work and affairs results in a lack of rest or time for
people
to sleep.Problems with vision and pain in the abdomen were caused by the first reason mentioned above. Our condition was exacerbated and the brain's work was impacted by all of
this
. Another problem is that the less time we spend on sleep, the more we become ill. A consequence of
that is
the disenfranchisement of members and organs. Our body is in need of rest, and if we don't provide it, our organs start working at half their full capacity. After weighing all of the above, we can come to the conclusion that
people
do negative things towards themselves. Not surprisingly, many
people
started attending the optometrist and various physicians,
as well as
wearing glasses. We will soon see something terrible in the near future. We have created terrible diseases for ourselves in the future. To put it differently,
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if it persists, we will either become mad or die. It's important to be prepared to pay for all of
this
. We are the ones who are responsible for the consequences of
this
.
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