One of the widely discussed issues nowadays is how to teach children to be good member of society. It is undeniable that teaching children has become an essential part of our life
One of the widely discussed issues nowadays is how to teach
children
to be good member
of society. It is undeniable that teaching Fix the agreement mistake
members
children
has become an essential part of our life
. Fix the agreement mistake
lives
However
there is no absolute agreement on whether Add a comma
,However
kids
should be learned from their parents
or from the school
.
A commonly held belief is that upbringing
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the upbringing
children
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of children
starts
from their family, so most people believe that being good Change the verb form
start
at
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in
public
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the public
beginning
from the family. As evidence of Wrong verb form
begins
this
they point to when Add a comma
,this
child
was born, they saw their Add an article
the child
a child
parents
firstly
. And they try to repeat the movements of their Change the word
first
parents
’. Furthermore
, i
think it is noticeable that Change the capitalization
I
children
who have problems in the family are mostly aggressive or cannot be talkative with others. It could be explained by the fact that,
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apply
kids
who’s
in good relationships with their Change the verb form
who are
parents
are more likely to be successful and cheerful. As a result
, it leads to parents
take
a main role in the upbringing of their child and relationships between them directly Wrong verb form
taking
relates
to how a Correct subject-verb agreement
relate
children
behaves in society.
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child
On the other hand
, some people claim that school
is the place to learn how to be good
member of society. Add an article
a good
For example
, they may mention that kids
spend more time in school
and they may feel themselves
comfortable when they are playing with their friends. Correct pronoun usage
apply
In addition
, scientists believe that people unconsciously repeat the habits and characteristics of those with whom they feel comfortable. The explanation lies in the fact that kids
are being
more open with friends than family and mostly they can discuss their experiences with friends. Unnecessary verb
apply
Therefore
, kids
also
learn to be fine at school
.
In conclusion, taking everything mentioned into account i
would argue that both views are true and each of them takes an important role Change the capitalization
I
of
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in
kid’s
life.Correct article usage
a kid’s
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