One of the widely discussed issues nowadays is how to teach children to be good member of society. It is undeniable that teaching children has become an essential part of our life

One of the widely discussed issues nowadays is how to teach

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to be good

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of society. It is undeniable that teaching

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has become an essential part of our

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there is no absolute agreement on whether

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should be learned from their

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or from the

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. A commonly held belief is that

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from their family, so most people believe that being good

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from the family. As evidence of

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they point to when

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was born, they saw their

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. And they try to repeat the movements of their

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think it is noticeable that

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who have problems in the family are mostly aggressive or cannot be talkative with others. It could be explained by the fact that

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in good relationships with their

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are more likely to be successful and cheerful.

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, it leads to

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a main role in the upbringing of their child and relationships between them directly

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behaves in society.

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, some people claim that

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is the place to learn how to be

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member of society.

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, they may mention that

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spend more time in

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and they may feel

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comfortable when they are playing with their friends.

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, scientists believe that people unconsciously repeat the habits and characteristics of those with whom they feel comfortable. The explanation lies in the fact that

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are

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more open with friends than family and mostly they can discuss their experiences with friends.

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learn to be fine at

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. In conclusion, taking everything mentioned into account

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would argue that both views are true and each of them takes an important role

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life.