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Some people belive that it is good share as much information as possible in scientific research, business and the academic world. others belive that some information is too important or too valuable to be shared freely. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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In
this
 modern era, restricting
information
 for the sake of public security and national importance seems irrational to many
while
 others opine that
information
 should be available only when the authority deems them suitable for access both views would be examined in
this
 essay. I personally believe that scientific studies, the academic arena, and
bussiness
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business
businesses
 can
be
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greatly
benefied
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benefit
 if the
information
 is made open to them without
restrictrions
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restrictions
restriction
. The proponent of restricting sensitive
information
 believe that unrestricted access to
information
 could
pentrate
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penetrate
 state
seucrity
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security
. lead to public outcry ,hand over
technology
 to terrorists,and facilitate corporate monopoly.So
information
 has to be properly
securutinized
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scrutinized
 before making them public. In
this
 digital era,
information
spread
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 like
wild fire
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 and for the sake of maintaining global peace, it should be
delimated
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delimited
eliminated
decimated
.
According to
this
 group of people.
For
instance
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 if nuclear
technology
 is shared with all
nation
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nations
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 for scientific studies, the world will soon stand on the verge of
obliterartion
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obliteration
,despite the incredible
posiblity
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possibility
this
technology
 possesses to facilitate the
citizens
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 energy demands. On the
controrary
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contrary
, those who advocate for unobstructed access to
information
 say that scientific research largely depends on available data and previous findings. If valuable
information
 and past findings are not shared openly with academics and
researchs
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research
researchers
,global
progres
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progress
 will become a standstill.
For instance
,the internet is probably the most significant invention the modern world has produced and if
this
technology
 and not been shared by the US military. We would still be living in the pre-internet era.
Moreover
, clandestine
information
 has no value if it is not
implmented
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implemented
 in the real world and
thus
 curbing them is like slaughtering the potential for progress. In conclusion,
information
 has limited value when it is
constrined
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constrained
 and not shared with great minds. For true global progress, restrictions on valuable
information
 should be debarred and let people know the truth
instead
 of keeping them in the dark.
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