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The table below shows information about age, cylinde in come per person and population below poverty line in three states in the USA. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The table below shows information about age, cylinde in come per person and population below poverty line in three states in the USA. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The provided tabulas chart illustrates the details in regards to the lifetime of people, the average revenue of each individual
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 the number of residents who are below.Certain levels of income within 3 state of America. With respect to age over 18, the value of Utal was witnessed at 28 per cent, being greater than the number of
California
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 and Florida by 15%.
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, the rate of Florida outraced the figure of
California
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 and Ukul in the ratio of 23:8:13 with respect to aged over sixty. In context of general salary per resident, the datum of
California
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 , Utal
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 florida was 23,000 17,000 aad 22,000 dollares arspectively.
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, in team of local under income limit the proportion of
California
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 was 16 percentile .
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, the significant lesser value (around 9 percentage) was analyzed in Utal

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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Replace the words california with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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