Nowadays, more and more people decide to have children later in their life. What do you think are the reasons for this? Do the advantages of this trend outweigh the disadvantages?

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days with the shift

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lifestyle and priorities, many prefer to have

children

at a later age. It is uncommon to see women give birth at the age of 18, usually

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after 30 years old. Studies

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shown there are several factors

contribute

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to

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trend, from higher living standards,

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life priorities, and

parents

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to be more emotionally prepared. In

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essay

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the factors will be discussed followed

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my opinion on

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. As the world develops, living standards have become higher.

Consequently

,

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increases living

expense

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. In order to make sure

children

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a decent tertiary education many

parents

start saving for their

children

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education fund early.

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is only

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tip of the

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as

children

will incur other

expense

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such

as food, medical, clothes, etc. Adding up all these, many modern young couples have family planning and priorities on reaching

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financial situation before having

children

.

This

is an inevitable impact as the economy grows and people try to make more money for a comfortable life.

Secondly

, as society becomes more educated, both men and women spend longer time in formal education. By the time university students graduate, they are on average 25 years old. Some of the more ambitious ones will choose to focus on their personal goal or career

accomplishment

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before settling down on forming a family. One thing leads to another,

couples

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choose

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who choose

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to get married late will eventually

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the parenthood journey late. Another key factor on why people choose to have

children

late is they prefer to be more

matured

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, emotionally and mentally before their

children

come along.

This

is because many view having

children

as

a

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enormous task in life, it involves a lot of coaching to the young ones and setting their future path correctly.

Hence

, they prefer to take

longer

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time for preparation. In summary, there are benefits

as well as

downsides

of

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having

children

late. In my opinion, it

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more advantageous as it allows

parents

to be better prepared in terms of financial and emotional stability. It benefits both the

parents

and

children

.