The diagram below shows the process how making wool .

The diagram below shows the process how making wool .
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The diagram below shows the process how making wool .
The picture illustrates the process of producing
wool
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and making useful things from
this
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  product.
Overall
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, there are 14 main stages in total in the process. The production of
wool
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began with sheep and ended up with preparing a variety type of clothes for people or carpets  . The
wool
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-making process commences when they shear the
wool
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on the animal's body.  Following that sheared wadding was washed  and
then
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cleaned wadding dried raw materials were spun by a special spinning machine . There are 2 types of products produced in that stage one of them thread 
this
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product recycled in the next  stage . Another product is called
wool
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and tufted fur and is sold in tufted storage, we can use   balls of yarn either  knitting or making carpets , and jackets for humanity.

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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Vocabulary: Replace the words wool with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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