Many people believe that countries should produce food for all population eats and import food as little as possible. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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of the

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that gained significant popularity lately, especially among

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health conscious

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individuals. Aside

to

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saying no to meat,

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vegan

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is

one

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step

further

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of

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not eating

animal related

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food

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produce

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such

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as

milk

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, butter, etc.

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is the reason many perceive

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as healthier and the trend is here to stay. In my opinion,

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is not the most beneficial

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and the reasons will be discussed

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.

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, human

being

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omnivores by nature.

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means we obtain essential nutrients by eating a wide range of

food

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meat, not only it is a good source of protein, it has complex vitamin B and minerals. Eating high protein

plant

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such

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as chickpeas,

tofu

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might seem

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as

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ideal replacement

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meat

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it is not

apples to apples

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comparison as animal

protein

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proteins

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are more complex. Sticking to a highly restrictive diet causes

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to lose essential vitamins that are

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required for our body to function properly. In the long term,

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could even have adverse impacts

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our health. As some of the main

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options are being removed, consumers will look for alternatives. A classic example would be drinking plant-based

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instead

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of actual cow’s

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. Supermarket shelves are mushrooming with oat

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, almond

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,

soy bean

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milk

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, etc. Though the

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companies promote these

milk

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as healthier options to cow’s

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, the fact is they are often loaded with additives and chemicals to have

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appealing taste. Prolonged consumption of chemical additives is no doubt bad for our

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.

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, alternative foods are usually priced higher,

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is a

psychology

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trick to consumers that these

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food

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are better.

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,

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always

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two

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to a coin. There are some undeniable benefits of

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vegan

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diet as animal farming produces tonnes of greenhouse gases. These gases trap heat in the air and

contributes

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to global warming which ultimately

destroy

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our living environment.

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that, as more and more people opt for

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a vegan

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diet,

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companies might shift from farming animals to growing crops which is more

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friendly. In conclusion, I disagree

with

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vegan

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diets

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benefits

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human

being

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the most as there are some obvious drawbacks

about

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it

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. To reap the most fruit,

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could choose to be on

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on

part-time

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basis.

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approach will balance out the advantages and disadvantageous of being a

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.