New technologies have changed the way children spend their free time. Do advantages of this outweigh disadvantages?

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has transformed our lives in many ways. Even for young

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, most of them spend their leisure

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on

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watching videos, browsing

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internet

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, or playing video games. There are some distinctive advantages and disadvantages of

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development, I believe ultimately parents do play a pivotal role in making sure their

children

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the most benefits of

technologies

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advancement. On the good side, the

internet

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is full of information and knowledge. Apart from formal education in school,

children

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get more exposure

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the

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internet

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and

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effectively widens their general knowledge.

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the common subjects in school, from the

internet

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children

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can learn about foreign languages, new cultures, etc.

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means during leisure

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,

children

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are picking up new information which could fuel their curiosity.

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in the long term, continuous learning becomes a habit for

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. On the flip side, spending too much

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in the virtual world means lesser social interaction with others. A common issue among young

children

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these days is they prefer to browse the

internet

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on smart gadgets than

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time

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with their friends. Losing social interaction could lead to

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of isolation and

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will cause adverse impacts on

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’s’ emotional well-being.

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, sitting down

long

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hour

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with smart gadgets can make

children

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become lazy and physically unfit. Ultimately, it might impact their body because childhood is an essential period for

muscles

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development in the body. In my

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, the advantages do not outweigh the disadvantages because losing social skills and being unhealthy are detrimental to

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life satisfaction. The key is to strike a balance between making full use of technology and creating

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environment for

children

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to grow up with both emotional and physical well-being.

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, parents could limit the

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children

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spend on smart

gadget

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and encourage them to play with other

children

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instead

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. In conclusion, the

internet

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will continue to transform human lives and in the case of

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, parents have full responsibilities in making sure the

advantageous

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and disadvantageous of

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development are well-balanced.