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What technologies did you use to help you in your studies? Describe how it has helped you. Use specific reasons and details to support your answer.

#technologies #studies #support
In
this
 day and age , technology is more popular than before and it helps people a lot in life , work or study, Especially,
Laptops
 and smartphones . Thanks to these devices , my study at school has become easier. Starting with
laptops
, using
it
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them
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 in class makes it easy to take
notes
on
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in
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 lectures .
Besides
, the
laptops
has
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have
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 many features that help me organize many
notes
 or arrange a schedule without spending too much
time
 taking
notes
 on paper or notebooks , because students only need to type information into the
laptops
 and can use many features
such
 as “copy” , “paste” , “delete” , “save” to save
time
 for taking
notes
.
For example
 , the
laptops
also
 help me in giving presentations and editing essays .
Therefore
 , it helped me get high scores in school and in presentations.
Secondly
, for smartphones. It
also
 brought many benefits to me in the learning process . Cell phones help me communicate with friends and teachers to discuss lessons at school or to find information .
Therefore
, it helps me to have more
time
 to complete the assignment .
For instance
, on my mobile phone there
is
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are
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 audio and videos of lectures and
then
 listen to them again. It
also
 helps me understand and learn more about the lesson
as well as
 at the same
time
 .
Moreover
, I can text people or call to discuss the assignment in more detail. In conclusion, Using
laptops
 and smartphones has made my
study become
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studies
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 more convenient . Thanks to these devices , I can easily find information and I do not need to go to the library or meet teachers in person to solve academic problems.
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coherence and cohesion
Ensure that each paragraph relates to the main topic and supports the overall argument. Work on transitioning between sentences and paragraphs to improve the flow of ideas.
task achievement
Provide more specific examples and elaborate on them to enhance the clarity and depth of your ideas. Make sure that all examples directly relate to the main topic and support your argument.

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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