Some people think that parents should treat children how to be good members of society. Others, however, believe that school is the place to learn this. Discuss both views and give your own opinion
Although
some people rely on
that raising a child as a good citizen should be done in the home environment, others believe that it is the responsibility of the education system. In my opinion, Verb problem
believe
according to
the scientific background of the teachers and the appropriate educational platform, the upbringing of responsible children
should be done in the school atmosphere.
On the one hand, notwithstanding institutes are established to teach academics to children
, due to
the importance of each person's presence in society, school is known as the first formal social environment that a child enters should devote a significant part of their activities to the development and nurturing of children
's souls, also
, since teachers have acquired the knowledge and science needed to recognize wrong feature They should help them and finally
have to teach students to correct chose the best way of their life, advisedly with the condition that children
will be have
in the future as a parent and a working person can be useful and compatible for the society in relation to other human beings.Correct your spelling
behave
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