The diagrams show the structure of the solar panel and its use
The maps illustrate the process of assembling a solar panel and how one for either
air
or water
works. Overall
, there are four steps in the process of warming up water
and air
for both types of solar panel
, which can be grouped into two main stages, starting with building the device and ending with warm Fix the agreement mistake
panels
air
or water
.
With regard to the construction of the device, a box which
is attached with two tubes, acting as an inlet and an outlet, is prepared in advance. Correct pronoun usage
that
Then
, a transparent top is placed on the box.
Turning to the procedure of producing heated air
, cool air
goes into the box through the inlet. Subsequently
, sun rays, which can also
be called heat energy, warm the transparent top up
, Add a hyphen
top-up
as
a Correct word choice
and as
result
hot Add the comma(s)
,result
air
is created, after which it leaves the solar panel through the outlet. Meanwhile, water
also
experiences a similar proceeding with the exception of the transparent top being replaced by a water
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