You drive to work, but have recently had a problem parking your car at the office. Write a letter to your manager. In your letter describe the problem with the parking explain how this is affecting you suggest what should be done about the problem
Dear Mr John,
I am writing to complain about the current situation that my colleagues and I have been facing recently in the parking area beside our office.
As you know we arrive around 9 as per the working schedule, but at that time we find most of the free parking slots are occupied, and
therefore
, we are parking in the area behind our building. However
, there is some maintenance work on that street and the responsible contractor is not allowing us to use that area.
Unfortunately, I am not happy because the contractor is using that space to keep heavy vehicles and other materials related to him. Moreover
, he used an aggressive tune when our employees spoke to him.
I would therefore
request you kindly speak to his manager and inform him about the situation, besides
, his officer behaviour. We really need at least ten parking slots in that place.
I look forward to solving this
issue at the earliest possible time.
Yours sincerely,
Mohamed AmmarSubmitted by moh_zno on
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite