The bar chart below shows the total numbers of minutes (in billion) of telephone calls in the UK, divided into three categories from 1995 to 2002.
The bar chart illustrates the amount of
time
people spend
on telephone calls in the UK, over a period of 7 years, between 1995 to 2002. These calls Wrong verb form
spent
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are separeted
separeted
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separated
in
3 sections.
From a cursory glance, it is readily apparent that local calls on fixed lines were very popular and people spent many Change preposition
into
minutes
in this
time
period. In contrast
, it is clear that
mobile calls had the lowest ratio.
Firstly
, there was a significant rise on
Change preposition
in
minutes
between 1995 and 1999 for local calls. It was over 70 billions
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billion
minutes
at
the beginning, Change the preposition
in
however
it reached 90 Add a comma
,however
billions
. Change to singular
billion
After
this
, the total number of minutes
were
decreased until 2002 and stopped at Unnecessary verb
apply
the
70 Correct article usage
apply
billions
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billion
minutes
.
On the other hand
, the minutes
for national and international calls on fixed line
had increased gradually from nearly 40 Fix the agreement mistake
lines
billions
to 60 Change to singular
billion
billions
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billion
minutes
. At the same time
, people who lived in the UK used small
amount of Add an article
a small
time
to make mobile calls. Whereas
, the proportion had grew
rapidly and became almost 448 Change the verb form
grown
billions
Change to singular
billion
minutes
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Vocabulary: Replace the words time, minutes, billions with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 2 times.
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