Some findings have revealed that cities around the world are growing large. Could you outline the possible causes and their solution?

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Everybody knows that metropolises growing around the world from year to year. Some reasons are affected

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as lifestyle, reproductive or government management styles. We can argue about the topics and give some solutions.

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the public's lifestyles are affected by the growing capital because, some population want to live in

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but can't find everything like leather, cinema, bar ,or a good school for their students even chaos in

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because some communities love crowded and stressful life.

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, one of my friends his name is Ali and lives in a major

city

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in Turkey which is İstanbul. Ali made a decade one day and moved to a beautiful village

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he lived there with four men and soon he got bored too much' cos he is

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's kid.

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, he moved to mage

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again. The example shows us that; the housing of humans affects too much for the growing

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too much.

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nations want to grow;

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why they orientation to their folk to reproduction.

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, many European countries give to money their children of citizens.

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, a lot of the population loves to have sex and they can't use condoms that's why they can be fathers or mothers very easily. It shows us the sex life of humans affects so much in the growing

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Third,

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government management is too important for growing some downtown are growing

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others aren't. Because big capital is so important for gourmands they begin envisage to the first big metropolis

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as İstanbul. The

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is the most important for Turkey and the biggest.

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, centres have many choices for everything,

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, there were many problems like air pollution or traffic rush hour. In my opinion, all governments should make their village modern and livable.

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Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

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Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 8.0

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Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

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Clear & comprehensive ideas

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Some findings have revealed that cities around the world are growing large. Could you outline the possible causes and their solution?

Support ideas with relevant, specific examples

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