Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage money . Others argues that it is better to try and improve such situation. Discuss both these views and give own opinion.

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circumstance during their
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, some nation argues that they have to accept their life
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views and
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the first view, being
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familiar person with all
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a bad situation
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consider
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success in
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job
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,
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unsatisfactory in jobs means that not able to accomplish any
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in a perfect
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it means the worker will not able to like to go to
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and make communicate with others staff
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will not hain any benefit from
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job
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.It is the same
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when
people
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do not have enough
money
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they must show their
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to
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about it.
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, when a teacher
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not like his
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as
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teching
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teaching
students as will be not able to
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perfect
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and
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arrive
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information in a proper
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,the second point of view
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some nation argues that it is better to discover and develop
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situations.
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,
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hard even if they are not familiar with the
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because it
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a sense of passion,
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and improvement to go forward as well.
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people
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try to
work
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hard and establish their own business they will gain
alot
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a lot
of experience
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qualify
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qualifies
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him
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to do strong in their
job
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and gain
money
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that
assist
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him
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in their life.
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; some
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when they are not
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their
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and
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do not have enough
money
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as well they start to establish new
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project
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projects
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even
restaurant
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restaurants
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,
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cafes
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or small
shop
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shops
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.
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,
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who
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acceptable
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with
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unsatisfactory
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the unsatisfactory
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job
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jobs
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they
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apply
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are
a
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powerful as they do not have enough
money
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and
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are still
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happiest
while
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other
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others
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prefer to
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work
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hard and improve themselves.In my
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both options are good but
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improving
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your self
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yourself
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in
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all over
lives
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life
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satage
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stage
consider
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as
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a comfortable choice for most
people
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Contentment
  • Resilience
  • Personal growth
  • Endurance
  • Initiative
  • Advancement
  • Catalyst
  • Financial stability
  • Status quo
  • Innovation
  • Missed opportunities
  • Life satisfaction
  • Adverse situations
  • Taking control
  • Risk assessment
  • Change management
  • Self-improvement
  • Motivation
  • Stagnation
  • Proactivity
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