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In many countries, people increasingly talk about money such as how much they earn or how much they pay for things in their daily conversations. Why? Is this a positive or negative trend?

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In recent years, people
pay
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have paid
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 more attention to money and usually put it in daily discussion topics,
for example
how
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apply
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about their
salaries
 and how they spend their necessities. There could be several reasons for
this
, and I consider it to be a very positive trend. Currently, money is considered to be one of the most important
things
 in life as we need to use it to purchase goods and pay for services. People have conversations about their
salaries
 because they need to determine whether their income is reasonable compared to that of their friends who work in the same industry. Apart from that, individuals
also
 talk about how they spend
necessary
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things
 to consume in their daily life and the stuff that can
fulfill
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 their preferences because they need to know whether the
things
 that they used to purchase are sensible in terms of quality and price compared to others. In my view, the circumstances described above should be seen as progress. In case the
salaries
 that they get from their current company are underrated compared to the companies
which
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that
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 are in the same industry or scope of working, they can consider applying to the companies
which
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that
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 offer higher
salaries
.
Moreover
, given that the
things
 that they used to buy have higher prices compared to their friends, they can ask for new sorts of
things
 and buy them in order to maximize the utilities of their budget. In conclusion,the rise of conversation about money between individuals is because it is essential for our well-being, and I believe that these developments are
favorable
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.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • consumerism
  • materialism
  • financial transparency
  • societal taboos
  • economic fluctuations
  • financial management
  • financial literacy
  • purchasing decisions
  • wealth glorification
  • economic stratification
  • social comparison
  • peer pressure
  • income disparity
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