The chart below gives information about how families in one country spent their weekly income in 1968 and in 2018.
The bar graph shows the weekly average expenditure made by families in relation to their salaries in 1968 and 2018 in a certain country.
Overall
, the spending experienced many changes over time. It can be seen that Linking Words
food
was the most important expenditure in 1968 Use synonyms
while
in 2018 it changed to leisure with Linking Words
also
a huge difference in the percentages designated to these categories. Linking Words
Besides
Linking Words
this
, in 2018 categories Linking Words
such
as housing and transport increased considerably compared to 1968, Linking Words
whereas
Linking Words
food
, fuel and power, clothing and footwear and personal Use synonyms
goods
decreased their percentages by 2018. Use synonyms
Finally
, the only category that did not experiment with any changes was household Linking Words
goods
.
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To begin
with, in 1968, families spent most of their salary on Linking Words
food
, representing 35% of the total, followed by clothing and footwear and housing, which shared the same percentage of 10%. In fourth place, leisure represented just under 10%, Use synonyms
whereas
household and personal Linking Words
goods
Use synonyms
as well as
transport represented around 8% respectively. Linking Words
Finally
, the least expenditure was on fuel and power, which was just over 5%.
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On the other hand
, in 2018, the biggest spending was related to leisure activities, which was over 20% of the total income. The second position was occupied by housing with just under 20%, followed by Linking Words
food
with over 15% and Use synonyms
then
by transport, with an index of just under 15%. Regarding household Linking Words
goods
, Use synonyms
this
category represented the same index that it was in 1968 of 8%. Clothing and footwear represented 5%. Linking Words
Finally
, personal Linking Words
goods
and fuel and power shared the same percentage of almost 5% of the total income.Use synonyms
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