The Table shows how many international students study in Canada and the United States by country of origin. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and making comparisons where relevant.

The Table shows how many international students study in Canada and the United States by country of origin. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and making comparisons where relevant.
The table compares, the information about many international
students
pursued in
Canada
and the United States in the years 2002 and 2003 by three different country of origin. To summarize, the number of international
students
who studied in the United States was extremely high both in the years 2002 and 2003
whereas
in
Canada
it was very low. In
Canada
, the international
students
studied in the
year
2002 were 5400, 5000 and 2100 in China, the USA and India orderly.
Likewise
, in the
year
2003, 7850, 5450 and 2835.
Further
, the growth in the
year
2003 was +45% in China, +9% in the USA and +35% in India.
Finally
, the total witnessed was 59870 and 70004 in 2002 and 2003 respectively,
therefore
+17% increased in 2003. Turning to another table, In the United States, the
students
who studied abroad in China, India and
Canada
were 110000, 200000 and 31000 admittedly in 2002,
similarly
116600, 182000 and 33170 in 2003.
Conversely
, the summation of each
year
was 581600 and 592230 comparatively +2% slightly processed.
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