the graph below show the sales of children's books, adult fiction books and educational books between 2002 and 2006 in one country. summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons when relevant.
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The line graph illustrates the incomes from three different categories of
books
over the period of 2002 and 2006 in one country. Overall
, children’s
books
had the highest sales
, whilst educational books
had the lowest sales
throughout the given time.
Between 2002 and 2003, both children’s
and educational books
saw a steady increase in sales
, going from nearly 32 to 42 million
dollars
for children’s
book
and from approximately 25 to 31 Fix the agreement mistake
books
million
dollars
for educational book’s
. Adult fiction had the largest profits in 2002, with nearly 45 Change noun form
books
million
dollars
. But a slight decline by
about 10 Change preposition
of
million
was observed in the following year, made
adult fiction lose its first place for Wrong verb form
making
children’s
books
.
There was a gradual increase in the income from children’s
books
till 2005, after that the sales
dramatically rose and reached a high of 55 million
dollars
in 2006, making it the highest-selling category of books
. Whilst for adult fiction there was a slight increment in sales
between 2003 and 2004. Following that the sales
saw a significant decline and hit a trough of 30 million
dollars
in 2006. As for educational books
the profits showed a continuous decrease and plunged Add a comma
,books
at
approximately 28 Change preposition
to
million
in 2005. The sales
improved slightly in the following year and reached little
above 30 Correct article usage
a little
million
dollars
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