the graph below show the sales of children's books, adult fiction books and educational books between 2002 and 2006 in one country. summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons when relevant.
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The line graph illustrates the incomes from three different categories of
books
over the period of 2002 and 2006 in one country. Use synonyms
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children’s
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Between 2002 and 2003, both Use synonyms
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, going from nearly 32 to 42 Use synonyms
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children’s
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. Adult fiction had the largest profits in 2002, with nearly 45 Change noun form
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children’s
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