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Every year several languages die out. Some people think that this is not important because life will be easier if there are fewer languages in the world. To what exyent do you agree or disagree?

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Nowadays, numerous
languages
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 have disappeared in the world.
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 some
people
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 say that fewer
languages
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 lead to an easier life. In my opinion, the disadvantages of
language
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 extinction outweigh the advantages. On the one hand, life might become convenient if all of the
people
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 speak the same
language
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.
Firstly
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, The governments of countries that have considerable populations set up official
languages
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 to promote the policy easily.
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,
although
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 China is a multicultural country, Chinese teachers merely need to teach lessons in their official
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, Mandarin, in the school.
Secondly
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, lawmakers don’t need to set up laws in numerous
languages
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 since most of the citizens speak the same
language
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.
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,
people
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 who have different races can cultivate a sense of belonging and unity
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 the nation.
On the other hand
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,
language
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 is linked with the
culture
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. The various
languages
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 symbolize the diversity of the
culture
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. The extinction of any
languages
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 results in the disappearance of their
culture
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. Humans would feel disoriented if we lost our
culture
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, the history of our races and the memories of our ancestors.
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, in Taiwan,
people
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 often name cities because of certain historical events.
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, if
people
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 around the globe all speak a single
language
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, the world will become boring and dull. We like to establish connections and contact because every individual has different experiences. If we all speak the same
language
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, we will not only lose the diversity of
languages
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 but
also
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 lose the fascinating chances of exchanging our differences.
To sum up
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,
although
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 it is necessary for big countries to unify their
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 to consolidate national power, we should still keep the diversity of
languages
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 in order to protect our
culture
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 and history.
According to
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 the reason above, I disagree with the saying “several
languages
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 die out is not important.”
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