Advertisements are becoming more and more common in our daily lives. Is it a positive or negative development?

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Reading magazines, watching TV, or walking on the street, the appearance of
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is too familiar for us to notice that every part of our lives
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filled with them. The pros and cons of the increment of
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promotion have created different opinions on whether it should be supported or opposed, but in my point of view, advertising is both positive and negative. On the one hand,
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play a major role for both customers and businesses. First of all, promoting can raise awareness of a product or even a company. In general, most
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usually leave an impression in the consumer's mind about the brand
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of an immediate purchase decision which not only helps buyers make better settlements in the future but
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enhances credibility and maintains the relationship between the brand and customers.
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, when you see a fast food advertisement, you might not order it right away, but a few hours later when your stomach starts growling, you may search for that restaurant,
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way, you can prevent purchasing fecklessly and if the meal was good, the place
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gains a potential customer.
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, the development of
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requires abundant human resources which means increased job opportunities.
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, as everything in life has its own polar opposite,
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situation
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leaves negative effects.
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often use psychological effects like “Now Or Never", limited vouchers or special offers that generate a sense of urgency in the minds of people to create
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desire to buy unessential things. They
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lead to misrepresentation to compete with their competitors by giving poor quality products
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of the
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customers saw on TV. As for business, overuse
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advertisements
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can cause a waste of money
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used for investing in research and development. In conclusion, the rise of modern advertising in our society places an important position in commerce but it
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has adverse impacts.
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