Some people think cities are the best place to live. Others people prefer to live in the countryside. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Nowadays, many

people

believe that living in the

cities

is the best decision

whereas

other

people

would rather

to

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settle down in the rural

areas

.

While

I accept that

this

perception is somewhat justifiable, I believe that

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in the

cities

is much better than in the countryside because of the well-developed infrastructures. On the one hand, living in metropolitan

areas

can offer more opportunities for some well-paid

jobs

. Many companies, in recent years,

are

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requested

for

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at least a university degree to get a high salary

jobs

.

This

requirement has

been

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attracted a large number of young adults from rural

areas

to migrate into the

cities

.

By contrast

, living in the

cities

could

make

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cause

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some daily issues

such

as traffic

jam

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jams

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, high living

cost

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costs

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and pollution. Taking everything into account, living and studying in the urban

areas

would help

people

to improve

the

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income and knowledge but

also

offer some harmful problems.

On the other hand

, living in

the

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rural

areas

can offer an easier lifestyle. Citizens can get less competitive

jobs

but they still can pay for their living

cost

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costs

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and other things.

Furthermore

,

this

place is suitable for old

people

to live

because

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in because

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of its quiet and peaceful.

Moreover

, the countryside

areas

have more chance for agriculture business to develop. There are some disadvantages to

live

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living

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in rural

areas

, one of them is the high rate of unemployment. Because of the low-paid

jobs

,

people

tend to move to major

cities

in search

for

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job

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. In conclusion, living in

urban

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area is a premier choice for

people

who want a good career.

In addition

, living in rural

areas

is appropriate for old

people

to live and relax.