The chart below gives information about levels of education by age range in the UK in 2010.

The chart below gives information about  levels of education by age range in the UK in 2010.
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The chart provides information about the percentage of people in the UK having three levels of education (university degree, school certificate, no qualifications) in 2010.
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, it can be seen that the majority of people with university education were in younger
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most people who did not have any qualifications were in the oldest
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group. In terms of university degrees, the population aged from 16 to 24 and from 35 to 50 had the same rate of 71 though the 24-35 youth groups reached the highest point at 76%.
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, the percentage of degree holders declined and reached a half point in those aged 50 to 75, followed by 25% in those aged above 75.
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trend was reversed in those with no qualifications, with only 9% of the younger community rising dramatically to 72% in the oldest group. The figure for those with school certificates was relatively constant at around 20% in the 16-24, 35-50, 50-75
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groups, with 5% less percentage in the 24-35 category, but was as low as 3% in the over 75 old
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group.
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