The graph below gives information about the percentage of the population in four asian countries living in cities from 1970-2020, with predictions for 2030 and 2040

The graph below gives information about the percentage of the population in four asian countries living in cities from 1970-2020, with predictions for 2030 and 2040
The line graph provides details about the
percentage
of the total
population
living in urban cities in four Asian territories. The data compared figures recorded between 1970-2020, with estimates for 2030 and 2040.
Overall
, at the beginning of the study, Indonesia ranked to have the lowest
population
percentage
in 1970 among the other
countries
.
However
, towards the end of the study, in an estimate of the year 2040, it can be noted that the
population
of Indonesia rose up to the second highest
percentage
of the
population
,
while
, Malaysia reached the top
percentage
compared to other Asian
countries
. In detail, in 1970 the Philippines started to have a
population
with an estimate of above 31% and can be noticed to increase slightly to 50% after 10
years
but in the succeeding
years
it can be noticed that it is gradually declining to reach almost 45% in the year 2010
then
it began to growing every decade with an additional 5% roughly reaching 55% in
population
in 2040. The other
countries
: Malaysia, Thailand, and Indonesia started with a few populations of 30%, 20%, and 15% and they gradually increased their
population
every decade consistently. In conclusion, The trend of the Philippines was observed to have a period of decline in their
population
in some
years
while
the other three
countries
progressively surged their census every 10
years
. Malaysia surpassed the Philippines more than four times as much as documented in the year 2000.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Vocabulary: Replace the words percentage, population, countries, years with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "compared" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "reached" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "gradually" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • graph
  • percentage
  • population
  • Asian countries
  • living in cities
  • 1970
  • 2020
  • predictions
  • 2030
  • 2040
  • introduction
  • overview
  • trend
  • body paragraph
  • compare
  • predicted percentages
  • summarize
  • closing statement
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