In marriages today, some argue that it is the responsibility of both spouses to earn a living for the family. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Nowadays, it is
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topic that
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spouses
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have to support
financial
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the financial
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position of
family
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the family
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. In my opinion, I agree with
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statement and the reasons to support my agreement are given below followed by a conclusion. The foremost reason is that
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these days, it is hard to keep yourself,
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your family financially comfortable. I think that for
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issues, it is important that
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spouses
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earn
certain
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a certain
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amount of
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for sharing
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to share
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the financial burden of their family. There are economic downturns and recessions all over the world that
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all households no matter how much they earn.
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, it is difficult for average
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just rely on only
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member of
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the family’s
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salary. It is obvious that inflation is
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one
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problem
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government bodies to keep
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a certain level. The impact of inflation on
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the earnings
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of people is that it diminishes the purchasing power of their
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,
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the number of items they could afford with their
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decrease
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decreases
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.
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, during the high inflation and economic
downturns
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periods all
families
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suffer from financial problems and the wage of
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member could be insufficient for them. The research conducted by
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the US
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Committee suggests that in times of
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recession
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, most of the
families
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who claimed help from
government
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the government
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are the
families
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that only have
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revenue inflow. Another reason Why
both
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spouses
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earn
living
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a living
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is
career
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the career
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perspectives and personal growth of
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of them. It is probable that
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members have certain career objectives for themselves. Allowing
both
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spouses
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to work can help them find satisfaction and a sense of accomplishment in their chosen professions.
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can contribute to
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happiness and a positive outlook, which can, in turn, enhance the
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quality of the marriage.
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,
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situation could
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also
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be role
modeling
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for their children as a quality of shared responsibilities and hard work.
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the data
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collected from
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a survey
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survey
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surveys
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of different
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countries'
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government bodies,
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apply
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the
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apply
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families
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which
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in which
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both
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spouses
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gain
money
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for their household have a lower rate of divorce
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than
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only
one
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member
working
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of working
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families
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. In conclusion, I strongly agree with the idea
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that
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both
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spouses
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should earn a living for their
familyfor
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family for
the financial and marriage perspectives.
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