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The graph below shows the number of overseas visitors who came to the UK for different purposes between 1989 and 2009.

The graph below shows the number of overseas visitors who came to the UK for different purposes between 1989 and 2009.
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The chart illustrates the
statistic
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 of international guests who went to the UK for several reasons from 1989 to 2009.
Overall
,
it is clear that
 the
people
 who had a trip to the UK
was
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 the most population over 20 years. There is
also
 a notetaking point that the size of
travelers
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travellers
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 who came to meet their
friends
 and
relatives
 went up quickly through the years. First of all, it can be seen that some individuals who entered the United Kingdom for trade were 5
million
 tourists in 1989, up to the 1990s, it declined significantly to around 4.5
million
then
 considerably just over 6
million
 visitors. On the one hand, it witnessed that
people
 who visited
friends
 and
relatives
 rose moderately to 5
million
 in 1999.
On the other hand
, the figure for businesspeople remained relatively stable, before climbing rapidly to 9
million
 guests before 1999. Over the following 10 years, the number of
people
 who came to see
friends
 and
relatives
 was nowhere near as crowded as
people
 went to commerce, with 7
million
 and 8
million
 respectively. After 2009, there was a substantial increase of 4
million
people
 who came to see their
friends
 and
relatives
.
However
, there was a gradual decrease in both overseas
travelers
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such
 as traders and visiting
friends
, about 6
million
 and 7
million
 in turn.
Furthermore
, there was a downward trend in many
people
 visiting the UK for a trip over the period.
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