Some People claims that not enough of the waste from homes is recycled. They say that the only way to increase recycling is for governments to make it a legal requirement.
from
some Capitalize word
From
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people
point of view Change noun form
people's
that
not Correct pronoun usage
apply
considerable
amount of waste from households is recycled. They describe that the Correct article usage
a considerable
government
’s legal requirement is the only option to Use synonyms
rise
recycling. From Correct your spelling
raise
this
discussion, it will be clear Linking Words
for
agree with Change preposition
to
this
statement as Linking Words
people
usually follow the Use synonyms
governments
rule strictly, and it will be helpful for Change noun form
government's
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government
to protect Add an article
the government
Use synonyms
environment
from being contaminated. Add an article
the environment
at
the beginning Change preposition
In
government
should pass a law to increase Use synonyms
recycling
of home waste Correct article usage
the recycling
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then
impose Correct word choice
and then
on
the citizens of the country. Since the Correct pronoun usage
it on
people
of the country abide by the Use synonyms
government
, certainly they will follow the rule. Use synonyms
Therefore
, if they Linking Words
did
not follow the legal requirement, they will be penalized. Wrong verb form
do
For instance
, if someone Linking Words
break
the traffic rules, he or she might be charged for that Change the verb form
breaks
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similarly
if Capitalize word
Similarly
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government
elected a law to increase recycling Correct article usage
the government
the
home west, it would Change preposition
in the
be
Verb problem
have
great
positive impact on the Add an article
a great
environment
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environment
Use synonyms
will
be less polluted as toxic or detrimental material get less chance to mix with water, air or soil. Wrong verb form
would
As a result
, Linking Words
government
does not have to spend money on environmental pollution Use synonyms
for example
, any kind of rechargeable battery, I was strictly for a return to demolish an open space because of its toxicity, and increase the possibility of acid rain as well . Linking Words
To conclude
the legal requirement Linking Words
on accelerating
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to accelerate
the
home west recycling is significant for the Correct article usage
apply
government
as Use synonyms
Linking Words
this
rules will maintained by the Correct determiner usage
these
people
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as well
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as
it will be Correct word choice
and
more easy
to protect Replace the words
easier
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environment
from pollution.Add an article
the environment
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Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
The easiest way to score well on the IELTS Task 2 writing portion is to structure your writing in a solid essay format.
A strong argument essay structure can be split up into 4 paragraphs, each containing 4 sentences (except the conclusion paragraph, which only contains 3 sentences).
Stick to this essay structure:
- Paragraph 1 - Introduction
- Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
- Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
- Paragraph 4 - Conclusion