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The table below shows the number of cars made in three countries in 2003, 2006 and 2009.

The table below shows the number of cars made in three countries in 2003, 2006 and 2009.
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The given table illustrates the number of
cars
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 manufactured in
Argentina
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,
Australia
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 and
Thailand
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 from 2003 to 2009.
Overall
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, the manufacture of
cars
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 in all countries increased over the surveyed time with the exception of
Australia
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.
Additionally
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,
Thailand
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 was a leading manufacturer of
cars
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 throughout the years. In 2003, 235,088
cars
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 were produced in
Argentina
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, which was significantly lower than the figure for
Thailand
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 at 735,852
cars
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. The statistics of
cars
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 manufactured in
Australia
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 stood at second place with 452,163 in 2003. In the next 3 years,
while
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 car production in
Argentina
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 and
Thailand
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 rose to 352,759 and 1,162,356 respectively, the figure for
Australia
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 witnessed a decline to just 341,268. Looking at the remaining year, the figure for
cars
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 produced in
Argentina
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 continued to grow noticeably to 466,089, which was almost double the beginning year.
In contrast
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, Australian car production experienced a decrease to hit a trough of 245,624.
Similarly
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, the total of
cars
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 produced in
Thailand
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 recorded a mild fall to 999,963
at the end
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 of the given period.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words cars, argentina, australia, thailand with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "number of" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 3 times.
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