The diagram below shows how instant noodles are manufactured. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
The given diagram represents the manufacturing way to produce instant
noodles
.
Overall
, there are 8 steps for producing, starting with delivering flour and ending up with sealing end products.
First of all, the amount of flour delivered by trucks store in storage silos. Before starting to make noodles
, flour is moved to mixers in factories and mixed with water and oil. After mixing, rollers make the dough
flat by using rollers and become dough
sheets. Next,
knives inside machines cut dough
sheets to strip form and the dough
strips turn into noodle discs through next other machines.
In the sixth step, the noodle discs are fried in oil for a moment. This
step is followed by drying the cooked discs, which are packed inside cups with dried vegetables and spices. Finally
, these cups which contain dried noodles
, vegetables and spice flakes get labelled and sealed by machines. These instant noodles
will be sold to the market for customers.Submitted by guseoin on
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Vocabulary: Replace the words noodles, dough with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
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