The diagram below shows how instant noodles are manufactured. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
The given diagram represents the manufacturing way to produce instant
noodles
.
Use synonyms
Overall
, there are 8 steps for producing, starting with delivering flour and ending up with sealing end products.
First of all, the amount of flour delivered by trucks store in storage silos. Before starting to make Linking Words
noodles
, flour is moved to mixers in factories and mixed with water and oil. After mixing, rollers make the Use synonyms
dough
flat by using rollers and become Use synonyms
dough
sheets. Use synonyms
Next,
knives inside machines cut Linking Words
dough
sheets to strip form and the Use synonyms
dough
strips turn into noodle discs through next other machines.
In the sixth step, the noodle discs are fried in oil for a moment. Use synonyms
This
step is followed by drying the cooked discs, which are packed inside cups with dried vegetables and spices. Linking Words
Finally
, these cups which contain dried Linking Words
noodles
, vegetables and spice flakes get labelled and sealed by machines. These instant Use synonyms
noodles
will be sold to the market for customers.Use synonyms
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