In many nations around the world, declining health and a lack of fitness are becoming very common among people. There are a number of causes of this, but certain measures could be taken to alleviate this problem.

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Desertification can kill more
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than any other single weather-related catastrophe. Conflicts can come to the surface from
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. From the Bangalala midlands to Lake Turkana and Darfur, from Lake Chad to the northern parts of Mali, Niger, Chad, and the Central African Republic, communities are migrating and being displaced as they search for scarce
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resources.
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is essential for survival and it is dangerous if we lack
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. Here are some facts about
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: - Over 1 billion
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today have no access to
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and
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will be increased by 30% by 2030 - Between 1991 and 2000 over 665,000
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died in 2,557 natural disasters which
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90% related to
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- In 2020, only 34 countries had a national drought policy - By 2025, up to 2.4 billion
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worldwide may be living in areas that have intense
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