The pie charts provide information about rates of electricity consumption by raw materials in Australia and France between 1980 and 2000.
The pie charts provide information about rates of
electricity
consumption by raw materials in Australia
and France
between 1980 and 2000.
Overall
, it is clear that
coal was the dominant fuel for electricity
production in Australia
, also
coal and nuclear power
are
Wrong verb form
have been
significantly
in Change the word
significant
France
over twenty years.
In 1980 coal constituted the largest share of electricity
production in Australia
, but in these
year same of units twenty five of natural gas Correct determiner usage
that
has been
wasted. Wrong verb form
were
Moreover
, similar
number of Change the article
a similar
the similar
hydro
Correct your spelling
hydropower
power
and natural gas were wasted. Specifically, in France
hydro
Correct your spelling
hydropower
power
sharply decreased to fifteen than
Change preposition
in
previous
country. In 2000, the majority unit Change the article
the previous
has
coal, the minority quantity Wrong verb form
had
belong
to Wrong verb form
belonged
combine
fuels. Replace the word
combined
Although
, the most influenced
fuel was nuclear Replace the word
influential
power
, but
mixed fuel has the same amount Remove the conjunction
apply
two
.
In conclusion, the tables present a clear picture of the changing landscape of Change preposition
of two
electricity
production by fuels
sources in Change the noun form
fuel
Australia
and France
from 1980 to 2000. While
coal remained an important contributor in both nations, the most striking trend was the substantial rise in nuclear power
generation in France
during this
period.Submitted by dnm.best on
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