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The most important aim of science should be improve people’s lives. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

#aim #science #people’s #lives
These days it seems that most
scientists
 ought to focus on people’s lives and use their
knowledge
 to help people.
However
, some experiments that
scientists
 do are against humanity or sometimes even make
life
 harder for the
world
. In
this
 ,essay I will say why I totally agree that science should be used to save human
life
. One point which I believe is that public goods should be a big priority to the
world
. ScientistsScientists are those who have a big potential and ability to discover and make something to change the
world
 in a good way.
For instance
, electricity, telecommunication, modern machines and the Internet are just some 0f the scientist's invitation things that changed
life
 for easier and better.
On the other hand
,
scientists
 do some research in the hope of adding their
knowledge
.
While
 they should make sure that research does not harm people’s
life
, some of them may not know until they finish how their findings will be used, and whether they will be used in the right way and improves people’s
life
. The scientist who Nobel prize and invented dynamite to help with mining, did not know that one day
this
 would be used as a weapon, and The scientist who discovered the saving drug did so quite a chance.
To conclude
, there is always a way to use
knowledge
, in both good and bad ways. It seems that
scientists
 should discover
life
-saving goods for the
world
. Sometimes,
scientists
 will not know that their discoveries and findings will break through till they finish them.
However
,
knowledge
 and discoveries aim to themselves are as important for
scientists
.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • crucial role
  • enhancing
  • quality of human life
  • advancements
  • medicine
  • healthcare
  • scientific research
  • solving societal problems
  • improving living standards
  • global issues
  • climate change
  • food scarcity
  • technological advancements
  • limitations
  • negative consequences
  • ethical considerations
  • sustainability
  • environmental preservation
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