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Nowadays many people choose to be self-employed, rather than to work for a company or organization. Why might this be the case? What could be disadvantages of being self-employed?

Nowadays many people choose to be self-employed, rather than to work for a company or organization. Why might this be the case? What could be disadvantages of being self-employed?
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 individuals seek to have their own jobs and prefer the situation to be an employee of an organization or a company. In
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this
 matter and why it can cause problems for the entrepreneur and the finances of a country. In regard to the importance of
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 topic, we should point out that if most
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people
 lose interest in working for other
people
, it may cause an economic and employment crisis. Losing good workers and even not having a chance to employ one is actually a problem that mostly occurs in countries that are under development.
Instead
 of having one big company that could actually do big picture things and have huge contracts ,
however
, there would be several small companies that do parts of jobs mostly with an impact on the inside of the country not worldwide. In terms of being self-employed, you have to create an occupation from not existing to life or be a freelancer ,
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 you might be lucky and succeed in creating a business,
thus
 there is another side to it.
People
 usually see successful and well-promoted businesses, meanwhile, there is a cemetery of failed businesses all around the world,
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 it is not a trend to write books or make documentaries about failed businesses.
For example
 ,generally media shows us the
people
 who find a chance and take it
although
, it is a good influence for
people
 who want to start the way
Thus
, what happens if they find themselves unlucky in the middle of the process and lose everything? In summary, it is an important matter that governments should seek answers to
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People
people
 must watch out for what they are going to put themselves into and not take an action without calculating its consequences .
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • self-employed
  • company
  • organization
  • freedom
  • independence
  • income potential
  • flexibility
  • working hours
  • working location
  • passions
  • interests
  • decision-making
  • business practices
  • disadvantages
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